Fracking Problem
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Fracking
has been in the United States for a while now, but just recently has it began
making big headlines. With the way people live in America today there is an
extremely high demand for oil and gas. With tensions in the middle-east the
United States is trying to rely less on foreign countries for oil. This has led
to an increase in interest for hydraulic fracking. Although hydraulic fracking
could help relieve the high demand for energy in the U.S., it could also have
major repercussions. Fracking wastes large amounts of water, contaminates the
air, and pollutes water supplies.
Blog 1
Fracking has been in the United
States for a while now, but just recently has it began making big headlines. Fracking
is on the move in the United States and could be coming to your backyard. With
the way people live in America today there is an extremely high demand for oil
and gas. With tensions in the middle-east the United States is trying to rely less on foreign
countries for oil. This has led to an increase in interest for hydraulic
fracking. Although hydraulic fracking could help relieve the high demand for
energy in the U.S., it could also have major repercussions.
Fracking
seems like an easy solution to our energy crisis right? At first this sounds
like a great idea, but once you look further into it there are major issues. A
major problem with Fracking is water pollution. If fracking is such a danger to
our water supply then it seems absolutely crazy to do it. A fact on
DangersOfFracking.com is that there have
been over 1,000 documented
cases of water contamination next to areas of gas drilling as well as cases
of sensory, respiratory, and
neurological damage due to ingested contaminated water. If it harms
people then it is insane to keep building fracking sites, especially around
homes. With hundreds of chemicals being pumped into the ground to extract the
natural gas from the rock it is easy for these chemicals to lake into water supplies
and be pumped directly into households. If most people knew the danger that
could be coming to their backyards then they would be irate.
If
fracking causes such issues with the water we drink then we are just killing
ourselves. Gas and oil companies need to make people aware of the possible
dangers before they start fracking in an area. With the rapid expansion
fracking in the United States many grassroots organizations are fighting back. These
organizations are trying to have anti-fracking laws passed within their states.
Once people in future fracking areas realize the danger of fracking they will
not want it in their local communities, but the important part is making
everyone aware of the danger before it is too late. Although fracking can take
some of the demand of oil from foreign countries, it is just not worth the
risks.
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